On a day quite dark and dreary causing mind and soul to weary,
I sat beside the fire quite contented with myself.
I entertained the thought of dozing and my eyes were ever closing
focused vaguely, on a bookcase and the books upon the shelf.
Yes, books of many volumes forming multicolored columns,
awed my imagination in the secrets they must hold.
My aimless fingers wandered as through the books I pondered
then, by chance, I found a volume that was ragged, torn and old.
I thought, best it be discarded, for the price of time had marred it
and it bore a musty odor caused by ever-growing mold.
But, I happened to discover 'neath the dust upon its cover
the inscription 'Holy Bible' letters etched in faded gold.
So, I probed amongst its pages with its history of the ages,
at first, with passing interest, then transformed to utter awe.
The story of creation with its wealth of information
to the sheer appreciation of God's wondrous, perfect law.
It told how shepherds trembled when 'Angelic' forms assembled
to bring forth the joyous message of a wondrous, 'Virgin' birth.
Within sin-infested nations, there was need of God's salvation
so, Our Lord, with love and mercy, placed His Son upon the earth.
It told how Peter thrice denied Him; In result, they crucified Him.
Jesus murmured "It is Finished" with his last and dying breath.
His body was imprisoned; Three days later, He is Risen
and His mission, thus completed, even victory over death.
I then laid the book beside me; Analyzed the thoughts inside me
and I marveled at the message that this great book had to tell.
Within its beaten cover was a 'Treasure' to discover,
rich in paradise eternal and escape from Satan's hell.
Now, I cannot help but wonder of this world so torn asunder
in which greed will form a ladder by which man can raise himself.
Man will go about his labor, cheating brother, friend and neighbor
while, unopened, lies a Bible gathering dust upon a shelf.
I can draw but one conclusion why we're plagued with such confusion;
My philosophy is simple, although some might think it odd;
In man's constant search for pleasure, he's misplaced a priceless treasure--
A guide for Life, Love and Happiness, by the greatest author--God!
Author notes
Gold Winning Contest Links:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2392685
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2415105
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2434847
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2456830
*pic. courtesy of Photobucket.com
This is a reflection of my 'Faith' and is a Dedication to our 'Heavenly Father'!
I consider this to be my best composition as well as my testimony.
It was written in 1967 while I served with the 9th Infantry Division in the Mekong Delta region of Vietnam
It was during the rainy season.
This work has meant a lot to me over the years and I hope it will become a blessing to you also.
**Written with the same meter as that of Poe's "The Raven"
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Have you ever experienced the "Beauty" in God's word?
Comments
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B-I-B-L-E Basic Instructions Before Leaving Earth. Wow! This is just an incredible poem, my friend. The Lord has truly blessed you with an awesome gift. There's nothing I could add that hasn't been said many times before me, here, so let me just say what a joy, and a blessing this was to read. Absolutely fabulous; you should be truly proud!
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This is a lovely write. Just check (t) end first line. ??( too)
Most enjoyble . Thanks for sharing it and thanks for ommenting on my work.
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Exquisitely Extraordinary...
Blessed are those that can write to witness their visions, and in privileged moments testify their beliefs and the fire of their Faith.
Outstanding composition... "A Buried Treasure" strikes the dynamo of the mind of the soul... A testimony from the inner heart showing the perseverance of the Faith on the road to wonders... A march to wonders' town under the sounds and beating of seraphic drums.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Yay!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy
Another one~ Woo Hoo...
Me thinks I inhaled this one before...
Powerful piece!
I can see why this is Your Favorite
for it is one of mine from Yours~
Bravo!!
So I will leave more clappies~
Woot~
Yay!! 
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice 
Best wishes in all You do~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Ny friend and fellow poet. You have penned a Masterpiece here in your poem. The flow of the poem is excellent. The words and the message is awesome. If there is a Poetry hall of fame your poem deserves a top place in it. Thank you for sharing this with us here on AP. I received a blessing in reading this.
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WOW Al. I am truly impressed Your rhyme meter and flow in this testiment to your beliefs. It is flawless. I'm surprised you "only" have four Gold Trophys. This poem should have garnered many more! You captured Poe's rhythm and flow flawlessly. This poem should be published. Bravo.
Thank you so much for entering my contest.
Bill
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wooow you've won a trophy for every contest uve enterd.. amaazing lol
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Beautiful. Simply Beautiful. This is truly the most breathtaking work of poetry. It was an honor to read such a wondrous poem. God bless you!
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Wow, I am actually crying... this is beautiful, absolutely amazing. If you don't mind I would like to post the link on my author page to this work, or the work itself with credit to you of course... I am speechless BRAVO!!!
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Thank you for your kind comments and feel free to add the link to this composition on your HomePage---
I would be honored as I consider this to be my best write and also consider it my Personal testimony.
Again, Thank You for your kind words and thoughtfulness!
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This is truly a winner. Very well done as usual. Your one of the best
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yes, I know the beauty of God's word and this was a wonderful tribute to it. So glad I got pointed to it. Was an absolute joy to read.
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Beautifully written. I'm glad you told us when it was written as I must have read this before. When I first started to read your poem I thought, I've read this before. This is a Masterpiece. Thank you for sharing. Don't revise any part of this beautiful poem.
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AMAZING! This is perfect in it's meter and flow, the rhyme is flawless and beautiful. And it tells such a grand story. So very heartfelt are your words.
I chanced upon this poem via a link on paloszoo's page. In recent years I have begun labeling myself "agnostic" after many years of faith due to multiple occurances in my life that have contridicted said faith. I almost didn't read it when I scrolled down and read the author comments (I do that first from time to time lol) But I decided to give it a try because I don't like to leave a poem I have come across without at least saying something, and I don't want to pass over something without giving it a chance no matter what the topic is. I must say I am quite pleased that I decided to read this. I have never been one for organized religion to begin with and believe that people should believe what they want even if it contradicts my views, but I have always thought that The Bible was a great story of the ages that should be looked upon when guidance is needed for the faithful. Anyway, now that I've rambled on and on. I will leave you with simply, "Thank you for opening my mind to think on this subject once again."
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Welcome Home brother. 23 rd inf, 1/14 field artillary, 70-71
This is a wonderful poem on your faith, and is an encouragement to everyone who is blessed to read it.
Joe
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I came across your site ina skewed way...you hosted a contest that I used one of the poems from for a contest I am entering......glad I made it...this is a beautiful piece you have written..kept me captivated from beginning to end. I am glad you made it from Viatnam to be here to write...thank you
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A beautiful write. It reminds me of my poem My God Is Alive. You are a very talented writer. Continue to write poetry.
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An Incredible Tale
A guide for Life, Love and Happiness - That sums up everything, transcending religion, faith and belief. Wonderfully crafted, touches the inner chords to play the 'Music of the Universe'.
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Very nice take on religion. I know how you feel sometimes. I like these lines.
On a day quite dark and dreary causing mind and soul to weary,
But, I happened to discover 'neath the dust upon its cover
the inscription 'Holy Bible' letters etched in faded gold.
I can draw but one conclusion why we're plagued with such confusion;
My philosophy is simple, although some might think it odd;
In man's constant search for pleasure, he's misplaced a priceless treasure--
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lovely,no doubts this poem has won so many trophies...
good luck
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Absolutely Amazing
Let me first start off by saying that I am not quite sure where I stand with my religion. But I still find this piece very beautiful and thought provoking. I am amazed by how the rhymes just flowed. I also loved the rhyme scheme, which is obviously the same as "The Raven" which is one of my favorite poems! Anyway great write! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck! btw do you still have the piece of cardboard you wrote this on?
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Love this! Well done tenfold for writing it, it's superb! You've made me want to read the Bible myself.
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Wow
What a powerful write!
Yes, I know well the battered Bible on the shelf, they are some of my favorite things, and the more battered, the better, seeing as that tells me that the book has been read, used, and lived.
Thanks for sharing in such a pwerful way.
God Bless, Larkbird
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What words would be truly right and proper before such a worthy piece of peotry.
Amen
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I caught the meter of The Raven right off. Fantastic testimony, my friend. Thanks so much for your service to and for us all in this country. I work in a nursing home for veterans. So, my hat's off to you and your pen/sword!
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You have written a beautiful poem here with great skill and talent. It has received many trophies in contests and deservedly so, for it is worthy of winning.
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again I read this and it is just as beautiful as it was back a while ago, keep sharing
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wow 12 trophies on this thats awesome and well deserved.... congrats.... and thanks for sharing your heart.....
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This is beautiful and reminds of me holding my grandmother's Bible in my hands. She's since passed away and the Bible has been passed onto me. I have my own, but nothing is as precious as her worn and tattered copy from years of being held and read. Loved your words....
Stacy
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Thank you for that, I loved it. When you take a step back and really look at what Jesus did for us, It takes your breath away doesn't it?
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Beautifully inspiring artistry...
Congratulations on all the trophies won, but more than that, thank you for sharing your muse's wonderful masterpiece with all of us!! Peace, love & hugs, xx Cyn xx 
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And what a testamony this is to share with us, beautifully illustrated through words and belief, thank you for sharing this very nice well versed piece with us,(GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST)..
M
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Inspirational and the rhyming, the feeling, honesty and truth and to call the Bible a buried treasure if one had placed it on the shelf and forgot about it, amazing how the spirit leads us to find it and endulge in it, I am happy I use mine as a sword, it goes with me to work too. Excellent write. Blessings.
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Wow
All I have to say is that this is one of the best rhymes I've got to read on AP to this date. You have crafted a wonderful piece of poetry here, and thank you for entering it in my contest!
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This is a buried treasure and I'm glad you brought it back out into the light, and what a string of jewels it is! I love the beautiful classic form as I am a fan of Poe's more well known writings. You must be very proud of this masterpiece. It's Glorious!
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Powerful poem and I love the story you told.
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With all the reading I do,
I am constantly plagued by an underlying unease that The Book which I should be reading the most, is the one I read the least.
Thanks for beautifully adding to my unease !
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Strong rhyme and meter here and content that clearly means a great deal to the poet, that shines through the construction.
Thank-you for a very strong entry here
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This is finely written, and I thought I recognized the form, meter, etc.; thanks for telling me I was remembering Poe! Your AN also ground this poem by telling when and where it was written. I am glad it gave you solace, and continues to inspire you. I do not share your faith, exactly, but I do believe the Bible is a worthy guide, especially when it is not misinterpreted by presumptuous people. I admire the way you have shared this with us. Best wishes.
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Yes, I have. And I just experienced the beauty of your poem, a remarkable feast of rhythm and rhyme. Great subject. Brilliant and inspired write about a brilliant, inspired book.
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This was indeed a blessing to me as I'm sure our Father will bestow on you his blessings for this most touching dedication of his word.
God Bless and keep you
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ABSOLUTE BRILLIANCE
Most assuredly your pen was guided by Our Awesome God. I LOOOOVE IT! I would not be surprised to see this in bookshops as a poster, bookmark or something greater. Priceless and powerful.
My thanks to YoursTrulyJulie for directing me here.
GOD BLESS
Linda
If okay with you I would like to send link for this to some of my Christian and non-Christian friends especially.
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This beautiful poem deserves all these cups and more Al. It's one of the best you have ever written. Congrats on the win.
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Wow, I love this. Gave me chills at its graceful truth. I read it because Paloszoo nominated this piece for the All Poetry Oscars.
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I should have known you'd pull this one out of your treasure chest. You know how I feel about it. I commented on it below Thanks for entering my contest. It's a pleasure to read your work!
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The rhyme in this is beautiful.
It reminded me of "The Raven" by E.A.Poe
I'm not a Christian myself, however, I did love this poem.
Edit:
I read the Author's note after writing this comment.
Now I see it was written in the same meter as "The Raven"
Makes sense.
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Wonderful
An amazing poem with a wonderful message.It strikes true in the bitter hearts of people who could care less for one another. Thank you for this great write and may your testimony reach many more.
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Don't get me wrong, I'm a sister in Christ, but before you write things like that you should think about what you're saying. A friendly suggestion, in this contest, read "People Around You" by Drummerfreak909. It isn't that those people care less for one another, it's that they see US as judging them, hating them, and rejecting them. So they themselves, band together as a community caring for each other as best they can when WE should be caring for them as Christ has for us. I'm more convicted by that man by any testimony of ANY brother or sister. They're already saved.
Belief comes through hearing the word brother. If all you hear is Christians acting like son's of the devil, than this poem isn't going to be of any use. *no offense intended to the author, I enjoyed the poem, but I hope the only testimony that the masses see is that of Jesus*
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Awesome!
Beautiful and filled with the Spirit of Truth. It seems the Lord came to you then and spoke these very words to your soul..................Thank you so much for sharing it. It is truly a masterpiece and I love reading it!
Castaway
God Bless You!
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Outstanding,
but I don't need to tell you that. (I was at Nha Trang.)
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Wonderfully written. This is a very hope inspiring and uplifting write. I can definitely see why it has won so many trophies. Thank you for sharing.
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This blew me away. It's brilliant. Deeply profound, but with such gentle metering. A lot of pages seem to be linking to it and it's clear why. (and I love the raven).
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Oh my goodness. I cried while reading this. this is truly a beautiful poem about a truly beautiful book. Thank you so much for sharing this inspiring poem with us. would it be alright if I put a link to your poem here on my page?
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It would be my honor!
Yes--It would be my honor to have the link to this composition on your homepage--This piece was written to be shared with as many people as possible.
Thank you for your kind gesture!
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Thank you!
Thank you. It is truly beautiful!
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yes, I can see how it would mean very much to you. It is a wonderfully written poem about a wonderful book. It is definitely a wonderful flowing poem and it definitely keeps ones interest. And the picture with it also adds to it. Good job and thanks for joining my contest.
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As before this is awesome..
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THAT was beautiful, thank you for sharing. The meter was very easy to follow, seemed familiar as I was reading it, and then when I saw it was "The Raven" I realized how clever you are, a real work of art.
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To be able to write such beauty in a time filled with so much pain, blood and horror is unbelievable. I am overwhelmed by this magnificent work by a amazing talented artist. Thank you for sharing this beautiful write with us it is so inspirational to all who have the pleasure to read it. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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gives the philosophy of life to go on with quality...enjoyed it and congrats on the trophies
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Loud applause not only for the content but for the wonderful rhyming and flow that enhanced the whole thing. Truly an excellent write...mal
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That Poeish meter was evident from the first line. Hey,a huge thank you from a sixties gal for your service in the name of our countrys honor firstly. Now this is a great piece inspired by many a youths coming to gripes with a very dangerous situation they found themselves in. Much is the pity,still true of many today. Smooth well versed literature.And the best kind,inspired by the author's reality of the moment.
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I'm not often left speechless or teary eyed, but this is without a doubt the most beautiful poem I've ever read, AL. It made me cry. Your beauty as a man and a friend really shines through in this perfect writing. It's so thoughtful and thought provoking. I'm deeply touched and will be for some time. Absolutely stunning and breathtaking.
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I very much enjoyed the meter of this poem. It tripped from the tongue in a delightful manner. Your faith is a credit to you. You managed to hold my attention by the "informality" of the story, it allowed me to gain a strength from its conviction...without the dire guilt trip that normally goes with stories of faith. Bravo my friend ( if I may call you that?) Bravo
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I completely have to agree with Slayer on this one! And I mean it when I say I completely agree! The most beautiful, heart-warming, beautifully written poem I've ever read in a very long time I loved all the rhymes! You've been to my page, (and I thank you for your kind words about my works btw,) so you know how I feel about poetry with rhymes! And this was just spectacular! Thank you very much for sharing!!
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I take my hat off to you, Sir. This is arguably the most touching, well written poem I have read on AP, or anywhere else, in a long time.
Be well,
Slayer
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I instantly liked this poem, so it gets a one-way trip to the finalist's list. The flow was impeccible, and the rhyme was natural. The message conveyed here is one near and dear to my heart.
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Thought I would drop in this first time and read "Buried Treasure" and I am not disappointed! It is an awesome write,just awesome...So heartwarming to we who have faith in Gods' word, and it has the substantial evidence of why we believe as we do...Wonderful rhyme and flow...Excellent just Excellent!
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Glad to find you, (through a poem dedicated to you by Thoughts of Solomon)
So personal, touching to many. It is a vivid and deeply thoughtfull expression of faith. Constructed with a sincere voice..
a solid conclusion.
Poe's "The Raven"?
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very beautiful
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I adore this!! The whole of it...from the wonderful words, rhythm, rhyme and beat; to the fantastic message that it holds. Brilliant!!! A fantastic write.
Sam
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Indeed, this does sound like my poem "God's Book". I like how you presented the finding of the book. I absoulutely adore the inner line rhyme and the end rhyme used together. That was truly a difficult task and it became a tremendous feat. I am impressed. Brava!!! Great Write and Great Read!!!
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Wow this is a sensation!
You sure know how to write poetry! Wow this is an epic and a poetic sensation, rich and crammed to brim of poetic and vivid imagery and descrptives, very knowledgeable too, and a joy to read.
Love this stanza:
"I then laid the book beside me; Analyzed the thoughts inside me
and I marveled at the message that this great book had to tell.
Within its beaten cover was a 'Treasure' to discover,
rich in paradise eternal and escape from Satan's hell".
Such truth and depth here. Says a lot.
You sure have a wonderful way with words and are so inspiring too.
Love it! Well done! Wr ite on!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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WOW! This is amazing! I truly love this piece. Well Done!!
Crystal
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Thanks for the entry.. and this is amazing.
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Powerfull
Your write is very powerfull a writer looking at his stacks looking serching finding an old book and wanting to discard it like a dime store novel. Dusting of the cover to find it was your bible.
Open the bible to read you went home like the prodigal son. That is the image I get from this write again this was great. I love the picture I love books and I hate to part with the books in my library
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Bravo well done
Absolutely beautiful for all to read believers or not. You have a great gift and use it well. The whole story was gracefully constructed with truth and love. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. Boog
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Oops ...
I was too tired last night to notice, but the rules of the contest state 30 lines or less. This is over the limit. Please remove it and enter one that is shorter.
Thank you.
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I dislike religious poems since usually they are very bad, but this one is a breath of fresh air. I could actually read it without gagging. I suspect even Milton wouldn't have thought it was a bad job.
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You are lucky. I gagged.
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I loved A Buried Treasure". That was very very good. My cuz is a preacher. May i print a coppy for him
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For what we seek sometimes is right in front of us. All one must do is open our eyes, and to look beyond what might happen to be a dusty old book, to read the beauty within. A hiddnen treasure for sure! His word. WE are truely blessed. ~Sie
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wow, such an incredible write. It is filled with faith and such powerful inspiration. Thank you for blessing us all by sharing this gift.
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REMARKABLE how this was written
It may sound strange but it resonates with the south east asian wars identifiable tone. The soldiers light of hope and life and comes from the heart. the words you have expressed with it make this a masterpiece of write , excelent
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Awesome!
This poem is one of the best I've ever read! It reflects a real good insight into the word of God and consequently, THE GOD OF THE WORD! Both of which are awesome! It shows what makes me admire you: A GREAT APPRECIATION FOR THE BIBLE! Great write my dear brother in Christ! God bless you!
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Amazing!
this was the one of the best things I have ever read here on AP! It was absolutely and utterly amazing! The Rhyme and rhythm are flawless, and the words? Pure genius! this expresses so much about the world today, and how the Bible is forgotten and the very word of God left out of everything! Thank you so much, it's not often that I read anything so blatently beautiful. -
Fabulous poem!
As evidenced by the numerous awards it has won...even had it never won an award here on earth, it has won you the gratitude of the angels that stand before God, to praise him day and night, as you have by giving voice to his Eternal Word!
Regards,
Degraw
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i love the first line it really draws you into the poem.
and i love the "books of many volumes forming multicolored columns, it just makes you want to dive into them and start reading.
this poem is a delight to the senses, and even though not a christian myself, i can feel the raw emmotion behind your beliefes.
and it is beautiful to read.
you should really enter this in the beautiful poems contest that i entered today, i think you would do brilliantly.
((((hugs))))) joss xxx
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A BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL WRITE!!!!
I believe this is on the top of the best poems I've ever read!! wow, wow, wow..you have an incredible talent my friend!
FIVE TROPHIES? that says a whole lot about this write doesn't it?thank you for posting it:)
SilverButterfly
Mary
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I enjoyed this very much, and your author notes as well.It has not aged at all, as all the sentiments you expressed are as valid today as they were 41 years ago. I will be exploring more of your work as time goes by.
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Very beautiful and enjoyable to read. poes rythms are always good to read and you write with the same talent. Thanks for the read
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A very worthy write I can honestly say! You should definitely be proud of this!
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the spirit speaks through you
i'm not one to agree with some of the labels that have been used.. as i believe labels are meant for canned foods
but let me just say that this write and these words are pure and the image and flow are very reflective
anything less than gold on this would have been insulting
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Hello BuriedTreasures. I can not say I share your beliefs, but your poem for me is a work of art. The rhythm and rhyme is excellent. Fantastic story telling. My regards.
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Wonderful to see so many deserved trophys for this thoughtful yet thrusting poem. I was captured by the immediacy of the opening scene-setting which reminded me of Thackeray's "Cane Bottom'd Chair" although the rhythm is quite different. You have selected disparate yet telling elements of the New Testament in a persuasive and unsentimental way that benefits your poem immensely.
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again you amazed with your brilliance and I was hoping I see you here at my contest.
thank you foe entering.
God bless...
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