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Worth a fig or two ...

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A sister-in-law tells me I am not a good brother

living as a recluse far away and up on a Range.

She says they visit my invalid sister regularly.

 .

I tell her, yes, I know how you feel, stuck with the

baby, as it were. And we do not get down to the city

very often, hardly at all, only six times a year.

Of course we chose to live at this friendly, beautiful

location, this mountain village, with views dreamt of

in Heaven or near it, to live as hermits, not to see

 .

my sister with all of her problems one of which is

she would not know if we had visited yesterday

or last month or last year and the toothpaste, well I

would buy ten tubes annually if that is a problem.

My sister-in-law tells me she sort of understands

and I remark to her incredulously, ‘truly?’

I walk outside and listen to the chatter of rainbow

lorikeets, watch the slow unrolling coils of the carpet

python on our green lawn. I love figs and pick one

.

or two . . .

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Life is never a bed of roses but seeking peace is sometimes a gentle yet hard option.

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  • RatherImaginative silver member
    July 31, 2008

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    Hoodwink!!!

    As you say, what makes it bearable are those "stolen" moments of peace. It smarts to have one's efforts condemned by another. Your piece communicates teh message beautifully.


  • Summer Dawn
    February 5, 2008
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    9.i will judge this contest w/in the next 24 hours. just letting everyone know. take care.


  • MargaretG
    February 2, 2008

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    This is salutary! Peace is a choice, and you contrast two ways of living with difficult situations. We will never find peace in judging the actions of others by our own yardsticks. The last stanza reminds me of Candide.


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    In life, when we get times of peace, we should relish and enjoy it whenever we can. I always enjoy reading your poems.