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where to?

What do you know of beauty?
I know nothing
I know only pain
For I see beings flying… but where to?
The door is closed
And death is on the floor. 

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  • Lae
    May 22
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    very interesting. good job

  • oooh, dark and interesting!! Short and sweet!!


  • Rie
    May 21

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    ahhh

    i used to write like this. i especially like the expression 'death is on the floor' for me i can relate directly, and you did very well with the little words you used. it isnt the best i have seen, but i hope to see some writing in the future. ^.^


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    February 1

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    Such a sad and thought provoking piece... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

  • Kiddy
    February 1

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    highly thoughtful...very good take on the prompt...
    It's different.
    good job there...
    Good luck..
    Love - Kiddy

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