What do you know of beauty?
I know nothing
I know only pain
For I see beings flying… but where to?
The door is closed
And death is on the floor.
A contest entry
- Butterfly soul by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended February 1, 2008, 9 entries
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a good poem - i know a lot about beauty. i know pain too though. theres is not much else i can say on this on a butterfly poem other than you took a diffrent aproach than normal. death is on the floor, we are all born and we have death to look forward to - which most do in fear, but not i. i have been here many times
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very interesting. good job
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oooh, dark and interesting!! Short and sweet!!
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ahhh
i used to write like this. i especially like the expression 'death is on the floor' for me i can relate directly, and you did very well with the little words you used. it isnt the best i have seen, but i hope to see some writing in the future. ^.^
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Such a sad and thought provoking piece... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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highly thoughtful...very good take on the prompt...
It's different.
good job there...
Good luck..
Love - Kiddy
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