Fortnight closes
The battle draws near
And now there is no escaping the blood and tears
No one can escape their destiny
No one can escape their fate
Though they may try
The effort proves no gain
The crossroads are nearing
There is no turning back
Betrayal must happen
Rejection must attack
My struggles proved flawed
For here I stand
The place of destiny
Facing my fear of fate
How could this happen?
I was to be the only one
Yet here we stand one-by-one
My fate is my own
My destiny the same
Yet now we are all intertwined in this deadly game
I knew this day would come
That destiny would strike back
But now my friends must suffer
I will always regret that
I learned my lesson
I studied hard and long
But now that is behind me
For the battle is drawn
A cruel game it is
When destiny and fate collided
But it is one that I must play
For the destined child is I
Author notes
I am under 25
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Comments
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wow just like genevieve3 said, this has a good flow, im alittle confused on what it is about but it is great all the same.
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i though it had good momentum and flow.
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thanks for the entry. It sounds like you have the foundation for a very good piece but i felt that the rhymes were inconsistant, which detracted a little from the momentum that you were trying to create.
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oooooooooooooh, me like.
rather bleak, but it works.
don't ya love showers?
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