Shine like sparklers,
against a midnight sky.
~Briefly Burning~
and then no more...
A contest entry
- Add On by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 1, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ? Enter ? by Liar. Liar--x.
300 points, ended May 31, 2008, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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perfection
what more can be said? the whole of it is perfect. congrats on the gold--well deserved it seems!! this is a very inspiring write.
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So true, good job! This was really good and I'm glad you won the gold, It's really starting to make me think. Good Job on the write. ;D
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Brilliant!!!
Congratulations on the Golden Chalice!!! Peace, Cyn 
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Superbly creative and captivating... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Thankyou so much for the gold!
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just wanted to applaud
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ha ha... it talks clearly about the mortality of human... very short and sharp...
Good luck in the contest..
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