Fading;
The voice of a
once strong soul.
Frail;
Delicate as the many
heartbeats leave.
Once known for
her petite dress;
The former prom queen,
has fallen from her grace.
Author notes
Um... I'm not sure what I was doing when I wrote this lol
It's about a prom queen, whos anorexic and then taken drugs at an after party and yeah
((Pic inspired for a contest ))
A contest entry
- Butterfly soul by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended February 1, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So... what did ya think??
Comments
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You have penneed a wonderful poem. Great imagery!!! Thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy
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It's different, but still good.
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This is so delicately scribed with immense meaning and detail... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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it describes a fragile soul of a beautiful in so many beautiful ways. well done and best of luck xyour fruit bowlx
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it describes well the fragile soul of butterfly...
I love this one...
Best of luck in the contest...
Love
-Kiddy
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I do like the title...and your take on the prompt...so much is painted in so few words.*rsoe* good luck in the contest.
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This is a great poem!
It flows nicely and the description is great!
Great work!!!
Tam xxx
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