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Rising to the Heavens

A shattering of angels
rising up to become God.
souls restless and rejoicing,
lifted by the winds of time.
Benevolent spirits kissing
the skies of time to become
one with self.

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butterfly soul by dailypoetics

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 1, 2008

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    Beautifully poetic... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    wow this is so beautifully expressed fromthe picture and you penned this so inspiringly. best of luck


  • Kiddy
    February 1, 2008

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    Nicely written...Have have drawn nice inspiration from the prompt....
    Wish you good luck...
    Love
    -Kiddy


  • nahomie
    February 1, 2008
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    that is beautiful


  • dustookie2
    February 1, 2008

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    What a wonderful take on the prompt so beautiuflly penned. Good luck in the contest.

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