unblemished collar
dampens eyes wide shut
disfigured beneath inflated tidings ~
inside out
spilling me onto
devout floorboards
that many have crawled upon
and bled ~
softly
A contest entry
- twenty five by AJ Morelli.
2500 points, ended February 16, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thanks so much for entering such a lovely entry in the contest...
al -
an inner sadness as if a flower wilting in the harshest down pour of a monsoon season in the southern west.
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Such sadness and power in your words with this piece... well done on another superb write... goodluck in this contest
Karen
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beautifully worded with such thought and power in every word.left me thinking best of luck in contest
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