Dress of love and lace
fragile, frayed with time.
A wedding day long time passed
binding love of butterfly hearts.
Something old, something borrowed.
Family heirloom
of a grandmother’s love.
A contest entry
- Butterfly soul by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended February 1, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the photo with this one and
"I really like these two lines,"A wedding day long time passed
binding love of butterfly hearts." good write
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Hoodwink!
The first two lines are excellent, and set up the poem beautifully. The next several lines tell the beginning of a sweet--maybe even a bit sad--story . . . perhaps grandmother has given her blessing from heaven . . .
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So beautifully penned ~ filled with meaning and splendor... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Lovely recollection of something a lot of women know, lovely take on another great LB prompt. Goodluck in the contest
Karen
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Sweet and lovely poem...
I flows so soft and tenderly...
Good luck in the contest....
Love
-Kiddy
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