"It is good," he whispered
And suddenly the fight drained from him
He drank of the sun, the moon, and the sea
And he was full.
And when he left
He took it with him
And he never forgot
The taste of the cosmos.
A contest entry
- Be Inspired by the picture by Wind Walker.
1000 points, ended February 16, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Very profound. So simple yet so meaningful, chalk full of fantasy and mystery. A very good read. Thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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Through shuttered eyes he saw only blackness and despair gods hand touched his soul and his eyes fluttered open the world was revealed to him and he saw beauty everywhere. Great poem thank you for sharing it.
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it is indeed good
good strong lines. I liked the imagery and your train of thought. well written. good luck -
well done i must say . very powerful with your words . nice write and best of luck to you in the contest !
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well done
you said so much with just a few words - that is poetry at it's finest. Wonderful write,
Are you my twin brother? I like your style
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Thanks! And since I'm a woman, I highly doubt I could be your twin brother.
I'm glad you liked my poem, though!
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Your Very wlcome
In my culture, we are all considerd 'brothers' or 'sisters' if you will. We all belong to the family of humans. So we are still family.
As old as I am, I'm sure your not my twin but it is nice to have kindred spirits that are on the same plane.
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I think this is absolutely beautiful! Can't say more on it than that....just beautiful!
good luck in your contest.
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Thanks for your kind comment! I'm so glad you liked it
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