From the embers
there's a scene
a musical box dancing queen
dressed in a silver shroud
she draw's in a big crowd
the music is mellow
with a soft sound
and her beauty is pure
flick-erring delight
as she dance's through
the silver light
A contest entry
- 190th Contest by Tarja.
450 points, ended February 1, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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Awww- very pretty, lovely images. I kept thinking of the song when I read the title
Good poem! Thanks for entering the contest! -
Well this wasn't bad... it had a nice rhyme scheme but I really think it could have been a little deeper with more imagery and such... more metaphor maybe...? Anyways I did like it, thank you for entering.
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