I see a pink semi
and lavender
then a white one that became why,
I would question the black exhaust
Author notes
good luck is a contradiction
emoticons and the applause aren't cheerfulness from you, so one word or two...
though rose can be souvenir of human visit
A contest entry
- “His answer trickled through my head - Like water through a sieve” L.C by Naridill.
525 points, ended February 1, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
my title by her title
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I like this piece, different and very intriguing. You have clasped this piece and left it very thought provoking.
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liked the stretched challenge
Sulfane thanks for the intrigue for me to go and get mine
this was a bit fun to write, and now anticipation passed, fun to read response.
I'll have to check out the winners,
also called
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