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Fnynu♥Hwo♥hTigns♥Wkro♥uOt Funny♥How♥Things♥Work♥Out

Tltie: Fnynu Hwo hTigns Wkro uOt

Prceuios ectassy,
prenteding yruo tgunoe nveer fersa
leik eth ehecos fo a bkoren roecrd
I'ev nreve headr beefor
Yraes,

fI silmes nda knid gserutes
rmaine het haret fo yuor sweteest lvoe sgno
ist tmie ot runt eht bleta
imrt eth rsoes dna rebw rde niwe
orfm ruyo fooldnig vinse

Monemts tath rae cuotned froveer
edn pu counitng rof notihgn
Wehn senocds rea wsadte wnoderngi
wtha souhdl hvea bene doen,
asmuisng hte impbliosse, imsoleibps

Lasde ot ltso hepo dan wedtsa dmraes
seplnieg wya oot glno,
Isnomncia, ti ssmee
ruoy eesy aym reevn oepn
eht smea sida orf yrou slou
nrvee kbrone, enrve pdiece
leki a pzlzue teh wdlro fotgro ot fsniih
ni yuro lal inconenec

I lwil capruet het bgi prutice
thiw ningtho tub a bluyrr lsne nad a fadde fhasl.
Teh rtes aer lnoy neviegat.
Jtus neo rinpt ot pveor
eth Tniatic nusk.
Lraen roem wrsdo nhta yuor mdni anc sllep,
sercest ynlo siclnee tslel
Yuo,
I'm ni vole.

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TITLE: Funny How Things Work Out

Precious ecstasy,
pretending your tongue never fears
like the echoes of a broken record
I've never heard before
Years,

If smiles and kind gestures
remain the heart of your sweetest love song
its time to turn the tables
trim the roses and brew red wine
from your flooding veins

Moments that are counted forever
end up counting for nothing
When seconds are wasted wondering
what should have been done,
assuming the impossible, impossible

Leads to lost hope and wasted dreams
sleeping way too long,
Insomniac, it seems
your eyes may never open
the same said for your soul
never broken, never pieced
like a puzzle the world forgot to finish
in your all innocence

I will capture the big picture
with nothing but a blurry lens and a faded flash.
The rest are only negative.
Just one print to prove
the Titanic sunk.
Learn more words than your mind can spell,
secrets only silence tells
You,
I'm in love.

Author notes

PROMPT: Wirte a peom wthi teh ltetres in teh worgn odrer. Eahc wrod msut hvae teh lerttes mxid up. Unedrnaeht wirte teh peom hwo it shuodl be wittren.

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  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    February 22, 2008

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    Your poem was incredible..even the right way round but I have to laugh at lines with words like this...
    asmuisng hte impbliosse, imsoleibps

    such funny sounding words.. haha.. but worthy of first prize!!!


  • AmazinJason
    February 1, 2008
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    you're crazy.