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Enshrining You

Passionate pearls of memories made me feel
I can never forget you and the wounds will never heal;
But with the passage of time I saw
Angry rays of the sun of my past turned into the soothed light of evening.

Pain that used to pain me always
Went into the dark cave of my existence.
Now it stays there in the silence of my soul
Never to speak again and never to frown.

Though it bleeds sometimes still now
Old stories are covered with the curtains of new
And flying colors are sending away the hue's of blue;
Memories do remain as the companion of a beautiful tomorrow.

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  • Leaving Today
    February 3, 2008
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    Please put your option number in the author note.

  • Leaving Today
    February 3, 2008

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    Wow

    one of the best entries in my contest till now. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest

    Regrads,
    Sweet Silent Talker


  • Romily
    February 1, 2008
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    "Though it bleeds sometimes still now
    Old stories are covered with the curtains of new
    And flying colors are sending away the hue's of blue;
    Memories do remain as the companion of a beautiful tomorrow."
    beautiful lines, A very great work.


  • Venugopal gold member
    February 1, 2008
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    Nice poem indeed, inner feeelings conveyed eloquently, dear sister

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