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rainsong

 

      I

    grey skies sing the rain
barren branches reach to catch
        each melodious word


      II

    furrowed branches play
raindrops into melodies
        strummed on plates of bark


      III

    myriad mossy twigs
tap percussion swinging rain
        to slanted rooftops

 

 

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  • slick99
    August 20

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    that's a good haiku!!! really good!!! you should be really proud of yourself... -slick99
  • ian sawicki silver member
    March 28

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    a good haiku series - i am not a big fan of haiku but i do like them when there are more than one, something more to get into. i like rain, it is great to listen to at the nighttime, soothes the mind and helps you go to sleep, and we have a lot of rain in this neck of the woods

  • Ibrah
    March 17
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    Great

    you have got real talent. I enjoy reading anything regarding nature or spiritual.Bravo!!!!!!


  • ParadiseBliss
    March 12
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    Simply remarkable!! The syllable count is purrrrfect.....and the flight of your fantasy is amazing. Superb haikus, indeed! My favorite is the first set:

    grey skies sing the rain
    barren branches reach to catch
    each melodious word


  • HopeWithWings
    February 24

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    Very awesome. I can see the , even feel it as it drops onto the various parts of earth. A very calm and beautiful piece.


  • a dozenglassroses
    February 1
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    Great job!
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