Waking from the dream that was in my eyes little while ago
And finding myself all alone in the liquids of darkness and sorrow,
It gives almost the same feeling every time
But this morning it was worst that made me rhyme.
It gave me a feeling as if I am somewhere in between dream and reality
Trying to feel you with all my senses and my existence.
And finding nothing but hollow emptiness.
This dreamy realm left me with a numbness and a pain
to realize that I cannot run to you and never have your glimpse again.
Author notes
This morning I was left with a numbness in the deserted world of memories. And I felt that I can never go back to that world again.
A contest entry
- Worst Memories by Romily.
360 points, ended February 11, 2008, 12 entries
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This dreamy realm left me with a numbness and a pain
to realize that I cannot run to you and never have your glimpse again.
Nice Effort..
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