Blink once and dream thoughts
think out loud and your dreams are tossed
flint ignited a Thinker's hallicaust
drink lava from this hell i caused
reasonable doubts from the relics that were brought
the cerebral tensions wore costs
this is an extention of the THINKER's frost...
I RISE...
HA HA I SEE THE GLEAM IN YOUR EYES
DON'T LOOK TOO SURPRISED, IT IS I
ONE WHO'S DESCENDED FROM UP HIGH
AND I COME HERE WITH ONE CLEAR INTENT
MY RETURN GOT YOUR EMOTIONS ALL SPENT
SO GAZE CAUTIOUSLY UPON ONE SO REGAL
I AM LEGEND, YOUR NUMERO UNO ALTER EGO!
My aim is to make deposits with residuals
I can make a difference
Though I’m only one individual…
There is wisdom in humility (as far as I can see)
Here’s life’s lesson from the earth:
It’s ‘Sedimentary’…
No one’s heavy enough to crack the ground; it’s plain
I can shift my density:
I am TERRAIN…
I am the dark one who resides on the dark sun
my black heat melts people's seat and causes them to run
you'll never see me but you'll feel my essence
as your flesh burns when you're within my prescence
there is no way to stop me, i'm invisible
and I keep on spreading because i'm divisible
engulfing everything in my path melting it down
slowly but surely there will be no one left in your town
while you're melting away and your eyes become wider
I will expose myself to you:
I am the DARK SUN RIDER...
Engage your thoughts to the mind of the THINKER (volume !)
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Bravo!
alter egos I have read pieces by each one of you guys and this is one of those pieces that make you want to just let that alter ego take over , you all have pen an amazing piece ofart here I look forward to reading more of you guys rolled into on
love it
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Thank you very, very much. This is one of my personal favorites by us. We've done so many collaborations together but this piece was one that I had a lot of fun with and it carved our "Word Warz" characters in 'ink' so-to-speak. Glad you found this one in our archives but I'm even happier that you liked it.
AsIThink...
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wisewithwordz. this is true... excellent write. you have captured the ego. you will never see me but you'll feel my essence, very true and very insightful excellent really enjoyed. God bless
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This is crazy!!! the alter egos have taken over!!! I added my piece. all i can say is this is CRAZY HOTT!!
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hardcore to make the bruthas act fool...(EPMD) said it best....niceness guarenteeeee! that's all i have tosay about that!
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Mo, this is sick...SICK...sic (lol). I love this add. Even in this winter I'm feeling your heat. It's coming from the core and up through my feet. It would be wrong to edit this page and press: DELETE...lol. lol...I love this piece.
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your add was what this piece needed....it balances the rest of these maniacs. loved the flow. this line killed it for me: "here's life's lessons from the earth: it's sedimentary...lol wow....that's sick!
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Many thanx, O'demented 1...lol (I'm just laying low, unassuming like quicksand)...then maybe I'll stand a stand (lol).
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ooowwweee!
yeah, i like! , i like!
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This piece is hilarious. Swan turned up the volume (guess he likes it LOUD...LOL). LEGEND sure does. I'm adding my piece. I hope it makes the grade Mr. Wordz.
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l.o.l.
Rome, I'm sorry but you said alter and this clown just had to put hisself out there and show his...bleep!! l.o.l.! If this isn't the intent I'll tell to get lost... It looks hot so far kid!
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yeah kid...now this is what i was hoping for...that other side of thought! i loved the closing..."so gaze cautiously upon one so regal i am LEGEND, your numero uno alter ego"...flame on!
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