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Colour Me In Love

Red nails

Chapped lips-pink

Nerves running rampant.

 

Black skirt,

Flushed cheeks-peach

Hands shaking beneath.

 

White blouse,

Shinning eyes-blue

Laughter escaping unnoticed.

 

Jade necklace,

Disheveled hair-chestnut

Can't sit still.

 

Keep looking,

Don't Stop.

External, Internal and In Love

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  • Heavens Child
    May 4, 2008
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    Very well written. I love how you've constructed this with all the colour.


  • Shari-Lei gold member
    February 12, 2008
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is excellent. The use of colour to accentuate what you are saying is excellent. It is very effective. I love that you are able to use colour to show the love that she is feeling and experiencing.

    Welcome to the site, enjoy
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