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So Let the New Day Begin

Seeing the Sunrise
First rays of Dawn
Allowing the release
of terrifying dreams

Let the moon descend with our worries

A contest entry

Enjoy! I hope this cheers you up! :D

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    Beautifully penned words,  I do love your last line " Let the moon decend with our worries". This is my sentements too, as the new day to dawn brings new challenges and hopes. Good luck in the contest.. and keep writing these wonderful pieces

     


  • Naridill
    February 1, 2008

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    Serene and calm, this is a beautiful reflection, words choice is perfect, the phrasing is enthralling.

    Thanks for entering,