I could use another cigarette.
you should probably worry
because I seem to be addicted.
and I can’t seem to take my mouth
away from the sweet sensation—
It’s pretty sad when you’re the only thing
I have that’s closest to love.
and it’s an angry love.
a violent love.
a sticky love—
I admit you’ve got me captivated—
yeah, I need you.
and possibly you need me too.
Pass me another cigarette.
just tell me if it's too weird
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HAH i love misdirection. This is great, you sound sophisticated.
is it a secret?
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possibly, you have a secet lover/ You don't know. It dosn't sound like much of a boyfriend. There are plenty of better fish.
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i don't believe she's talking about an actual secret lover as in a boy. i think she means her secret lover is a cigarette addiction.
am i right?
either way, it's a rockin' poem.
and i like the metaphor/whatever it is with the lover thing!
btw, it is weird, but in a superb way. almost nothing is any good at all unless it's odd. in my humble opinion anyways! -
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ahaha yes it is about a cigarette addiction lol
not mine of course -
I must have misread it.
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