Tiz a strange state to be in
Denying your hearts desire
Temporal induced paralysis
So as not to overwhelm the necessary
Yet
Love
Love is not something which should be withheld
Love is power stronger than all else
No mightier force to be reckoned with
Who can say more than Love
Where can be found more than love
Release it, let it run
Free the flowing energy
Engage in ripe enjoyment
Wash yourself with all it offers
Let the breeze blow through your soul
No more the asphyxiation of amour
Please tell me what you think
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Really liked this poem babe it spoke to me on so many different levels. Especially how it describes the freedom in love... So many constraints yet its raw beauty just lets it all fade away. Kind of reminds me how some women say that having a baby makes you forget about all the pain you went through to get there... Dont ask me why I thought of that lol but yeah this is a really deep write mwa mwas great job
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An excewllent piece... very insightful. This has been beautifully crafted... wonderfully expressed piece of poetry. You are right "No more the asphyxiation of amour" Beautiful!
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