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Musicians

A skater skates on ice,
A musician skates on memory.

A racer runs on earth,
A musician runs on soul.

A chef feeds on nutriment,
A musician feeds on creativity.

A dancer twirls on her toes,
A musician twirls in her melody.

A painter paints on canvas,
A musician paints on silence.

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  • liduen silver member
    March 16, 2008
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    This is beautiful. This is wonderfully creative. Awesome poem.


  • Death of the Author
    February 25, 2008

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    I love it, it's awesome, I think it shows great potential and creativity and thinking outside the box. Lovely work, short and sweet, don't really know what else to say

    Take care x


  • JoshuaScott
    February 1, 2008
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    psh why did you try to hide it from me the other day? It's really good, I like it.


  • A Poet Named Kyoto
    February 1, 2008

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    haha, it makes a lot more sense when I can read it in stanzas rather than a text! Great job, I really like it!

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