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My Apology!

I apologize.
No, my words weren't wise
So you see
An Apology
For "Poems are made
By fools like me!"

Author notes

I chose my own prompt-

The quote is from the poem that says,
"Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree."

A contest entry

point out misspellings or things I can improve upon in a kind and friendly way--THANKS!

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    Indeed they are and always will be
    Very cheerful piece and uplifting, love the image used

    Thanks for entering,


  • SignifyingNothing
    January 31, 2008

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    This is nice. Personally,I'd add a period at the end of the first line. Just my two cents. The picture is cute, and the poem goes nicely with it. Also, maybe a comma after no because it kind of runs together. This is a nice little write, good luck in the contest.


    • MassMan
      January 31, 2008
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      Thank for your helpful comments to make my poem better. You will see I incorporated them into the poem.

      Thanks for your suggestions,
      I appreciate you,
      David