I cant live without her uncontrollable love,
Strong ability to be there forever.
Loyal, to stand there with you
through thick and thin
I cant stand not to here her paws everyday.
I cant live without her everyday kisses
I could not live with out being able to see her
sleep every night.
Not hearing her bark every time some one
comes to the door.
loyal, lovable and my savior
you were strong, but no dog is
a match for a ton of steel
I love you!
<3 Lily!!!!!!!
Author notes
my dog did not really die! she's just a spaz! xD
A contest entry
- Dark Poetry! by BeautifullyBroken42.
300 points, ended May 6, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's SHOWTIME!!! by Hassanova.
525 points, ended April 12, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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i'm glad to read in the author notes that she didn't really die because it sounds like you love her very much and that she's a great friend to you
we need to hold onto these furry friends for as long as we can in this lifetime.
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yay thanks for entering josie!!!! this is awesome!! haha lilly is a SPAZ!!!!!!!!! yay! thanks and good luck!
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lol good job josie! Im gunna point out the mistakes:
Uncontrollable
ability
through
hear
a
steel
otherwise.....good job!
"Everything is juuuust PEACHY! *flashes the peach
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