Should have thought of this ages ago...
Simply, letting go.
No need to hold on,
Friends don't understand my complex mind
Not when living is much unwanted
And death has a daily invitation
[[Let Go]]
Swallow those pills
Chase it with the liquor
Don't let go of the blade,
Let it slice through everything
Hold it down, press it firmly, move it quickly
[[You can let go now]]
Didn't want any plan to fall through
So I chose three
To help me make this
Much Needed Escape
Author notes
"suicide"
i just wanted to thank you for this contest because i needed to let so many emotions out- and though some are still inside me, this has helped me vent a whole lot!
A contest entry
- Suicide (emo, death, sad, . . .) by DarkLotus4Life..
300 points, ended February 2, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [Pure.Narcotic] by Xombii.
450 points, ended September 20, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This has so much emotion to it. Wow.
You can feel the energy flow from it, I can see why it helped you vent so much.
This is a lovely write, thank you for entering.
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I really did enjoy this piece a lot. To me, it felt like you were using your suicide as a way to just float away, breath, get out and finally let go. Though also, this poem seems to be lacking something for me.
I liked it much, yes, but something about it maybe just, isn't striking me as hard as it's meant to. Perhaps maybe I'm just not good at grasping onto the beauty of death and life? Dunno, but it's missing something small for me that's holding be back.
But I will look back on it.
♥♥♥
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Amazing. I could really feel the emotion. Keep writing.
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