Sprinting to the end
Delving into the abyss
Your lies pure destruction
Acid in your kiss
Dissolved reality
Stricken from the start
Your touch incinerates my skin
Your eyes destroy my heart
But alas I still can not
Seem to let you go free
Even when only a whisper from you
Evaporates my sanity
So I'm stuck reaching for heaven
Retreating deep within a shell
You are my angel of death
Release me from my hell
Author notes
Inspired by the song "Stricken" by disturbed
A contest entry
- Music Inspired by Improv Machinery.
300 points, ended March 7, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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ah, a very intersting trake on the song. i love how you ran with it. my favorite part has to be the last two lines. im listening to Jaws Of Life right now so im in the right frame of mind for reading this piece. i suggest you check that song out by the way. back to the poem lol i love how you loaded this with so much emotion. i could feel the emotion just seeping out of the monitor and oozing onto my fingers as i type this. great write. thanks for entering, never stop writing.
Rob
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