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Syta In My Mnid

Wl'el lugah so hrad
We'll dei form oru cohretls
I'll nvree lte yuo go
Tgeothre wr'ee imomrtla

Nvere wlil teh drak coulds
Mkae us eanvscee
I sware to yuo, swete lvoe of mnie
I'll lya oru srorows to rset


Ervey taer dorp taht yuo cyr
Il'l wpei aywa fomr yuor eey
Wl'el mkae it tohruhg tihs mses

Jsut syta in my mnid tdoay
I pormsie yuo we'll be okya
Bceuase tehre's oynl us
Thre'se onyl tihs


I tihnk wl'el scucede
In lgihtnig up teh drak
So lnog as wr'er tgeothre
Erevy hpalses evnet wlil be a lrak

Is't okya if yuo lveae me
Bcausee wehn puhs cmoes to sohve
I konw tihs fcat satys ture:

I'm ttoalyl in lvoe
                                                                  ... Wtih yuo

Author notes

Stay In My Mind

We'll laugh so hard
We'll die from our chortles
I'll never let you go
Together we're immortal

Never will the dark clouds
Make us evanesce
I swear to you, sweet love of mine
I'll lay our sorrows to rest


Every tear drop that you cry
I'll wipe away from your eye
We'll make it through this mess

Just stay in my mind today
I promise you we'll be okay
Because there's only us
There's only this


I think we'll succeed
In lighting up the dark
So long as we're together
Every hapless event will be a lark

It's okay if you leave me
Because when push comes to shove
I know this fact stays true:

I'm totally in love
... With you

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  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    February 22, 2008

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    This was a beautiful poem never mind it being all mixed up it was great. I loved it, I'd have loved it if you'd submitted it the right way round as well. Good luck to you