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mists of life



Ascension enfolds embracing
gathering folds of gowns
swirling spirals floating
on falls leaves of warmths
smiling the completion
of envoloping reception
beautific bathed in trancendent
ardor touching mists of life


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  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    Such beautiful words and flow...a truly inspiration and encouraging write...deep and heartfelt...wonderful work...
    Thank you so much for sharing!


  • Smirnoff Ice
    February 1, 2008

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    Brilliant vocab in this much said in just a few lines a very strong piece that worked well.Well done with this