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Forgotten Flute

I watch you walk by me
Without so much as a second glance
You gave up on me
Wouldn't give me another chance
I don't know what I did
For you to abuse me so
And I have no choice
But to sit in your shadow
As you walk by me
Without so much as a second glance

Author notes

The poor baritone was all alone and being stared at. I actually did have a flute that I gave up on.

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  • Kelli Marie
    February 20, 2008

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    An intriguing write. Thank you for your author notes, they help to the understanding. I enjoyed the read.
    Kelli


  • zillion
    February 3, 2008
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    I played the french horn, guitar, and piano. Now I'm lazy just listen to music...not really.