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Transformation: Lycan

once upon a life
when i was only young
i began to see strange things
and was told to hold my tongue

no one was there to stop this
no one even tried
i couldn't find a person
to whom i could confide

blackness filled my heart
and a red glare pitched my eyes
i started to grow and change
into the thing that was supposedly lies

clawed hands about my throat
as i struggled for my breath
i felt my soul expand
til' it wasn't left

my eyes snapped wide open
to the world that most dont see
everything became so clear
like this was who i was to be

my clothes fell to my feet
which became spears of four
my face became a snout and
soon i was no more

my jaws dropped and sagged
as wings replaced my shoulders
i was mutating into to this thing that
could probably have smashed some boulders

fur - long and silky
covered me like hair
it twisted and warped in the wind and
protected me with care

a thunderous roar came about me
as i opened my mouth for a first
ears slid upside my head and
with that came the thirst

i wanted knowledge and meat
to fill this body well
so i feasted that night for hours
and only time will tell

feathery wings expanded
lifting me to the air
from that night on i was different
i didnt feel despair

nothing would confine me
and nothing would stop this drive
i would now be the something
that causes them to hide.

eh...i got bored with this...

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  • Greson De Winter
    February 2, 2008

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    I like it!

    My dearest cuz, Wings I have not heard that before! How original! I think it added more to the poem though.
    I also like how you described the hunger, the torment, and the emotional bliss! I really liked this piece.
    Keep it up!

    Love ya!


    • Tripple-HeadedDevil
      February 6, 2008
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      thanks =]

      i didnt know where i was going with this...it was offa the top of my head really. i wanted to do something different, to show another side of myself =] waha.
      luv ya cuz!!!!!!!!!

      Yami


  • Tripple-HeadedDevil
    January 31, 2008
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    i had no idea that was a spiderman background....ugh