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Nothing written but much to say



Constricted;
this boa of expectation,
like choke chain,
restricting refrain,
from forming pixels
of poetic disdain.


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Ever know what you want to write but can't get the words right?

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  • Celticmoon
    April 5, 2008

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    The flow of this piece is rather interesting
    to the ear when read aloud.
    The way it has a rhyme to it
    yet appears as free verse at a glance is a treat.
    It's very different and still it has much to say about
    being caught and tangled too tight to write.
    Thank you for entering!
    Best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • vici377
    February 1, 2008

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    excellent

    pixels of poetic disdain..how do you come up with this?..hehe..for being stuck with words...this is an excellent write my friend..thanx so much for sharing..hugs a bunch..


  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    I have that feeling all the time, but right now its all *tired* to me Awesome entry

    Thanks for entering, much luck,