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child's play in the garage
is thrown at a tool box,
real eyes look : pretend nailed...
Author notes
contest picture used for idea
good luck frazzles me
emoticons and the applause are discolored, ink words please;
though rose steadies
A contest entry
- 16 Words - 16 Entries. by Naridill.
380 points, ended January 31, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very intense and simple but stark. Love the direction you went, very nicely done.
Thanks for entering, much luck

