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Loving Look

You passed by
without looking
I was crushed

Your eyes smiled 
my heart was content
again...

A contest entry

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  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Simple but stunning - your words show emotions and strength through out, nicely done.

    Thanks for entering, much luck,