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That Is Our Love

You are always on my mind
I can see your lovely face
Coming into view
I can feel your many aspects
Suffuse within my heart
And I know our higher purpose
As you now materialize
And I gaze into your eyes
As the fog begins to part
What joy now to emerge
From the winter of our life
THAT HERALDED OUR LOVE

Grand circuits we traversed
The dark or the despair
emerged from melefic lairs
Giving evidence to Holy meaning
To what was ordained
From High up above
As we let loose the reins
So infinitely slow
Once resigned to our fears
Or human self interest
To cheerfully giving
Then receiving in return
A universal blessing
And unravelling all the mystery
OF OUR BLOSSOMING LOVE

Where hearts turned to stone
Ours carried on
With an implausable love
Turning time and again
From the bitter and the cold
To cheering and waving
In exstatic delight
Because or inspite
Of all we've been through
To break all the rules
And arise on the mend
Like a phoenix once again
With bright dazzling dreams
Metamorphosing in the stream
As we discard the reports
Of what others would say
Drawing life power and purpose
In our sacred circle
And they can't comprehend
How we transmuted bringing gain
Withstanding all the storms
The storms that would rage
To mount upon the wind
The eagle and the dragon
I swear the clouds bore us witness
As we magically transformed
And we traverse all existence
To become sparkling facets
And life transforming assets
As we shed all resistance
With only one insistence
TO ENHANCE MORE OUR LOVE

We're smooth fine red wine
That all souls will seek
As we evolve to the bright
And all will see our light
Our wisdom will increase
All weariness will vanish
And the heavens will smile
Upon our Ro-y-al crowns
BECAUSE THAT IS OUR LOVE

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  • coddledsoul
    March 10, 2008
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    Interesting piece... i like the form


  • XxTwigxX
    March 10, 2008

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    I like this piece, it really gives all the dynamics of a realtionship and everything that you go through together. I expecily like the lines,
    "To break all the rules
    And arise on the mend
    Like a phoenix once again
    With bright dazzling dreams
    Metamorphosing in the stream
    As we discard the reports
    Of what others would say."
    to me, it means that it dosent really matter what anyone else says or does. that the two poeple are whole with each other and are strong as one.
    awsome write, keep it up. I want read more of your work.
    XxTwigxX


  • poetryality silver member
    March 8, 2008

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    This poem so reminds me of the love I have for the Almighty and for the one the Creator gave to me as my partner in life. We have gone through many trials and have now come to a place in our lives where we adore and truly appreciate one another. There is so much here poet. There is Truth, Inspiration and a level of understanding that may not have existed early on in life. I stand with you in raising praise to the glories of God and the goodness in sharing my life with a man that reinforces God's will.

    Beautiful work!



    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee

    • Poet-treeman
      March 10, 2008
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      Thank you Renee for your comment. Knowing of you and your erudite and inspiring words of wisdom on this site, you speak from a place of personal experience and understanding in your above comment. God bless you.

  • froglover
    February 1, 2008
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    magnificent

    I had to read it twice to get an appreciation of even just half the impact. This is such a wonderful praise to our Lord and His promise to us and I wonder if many people would understand it, but this, I guess is the mystery of the love which we are so blessed to enjoy.

    • Poet-treeman
      February 1, 2008
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      Thank you, froglover for your generous comment. In truth as in many of my poems they are written and dedicated to the Spirit AND my beloved upon this earth as we evolve and co-create together. My sweetie is the the human source through which God also works to help me integrate and see the Divine more clearly. God's blessings be upon you my friend.

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