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Bunny/Child (contest picture)

Sniffing,

trying to find life

in days of nails,

keeps slipping

in pierced eyes:

your daughter.

A contest entry

that is such a sad one you found

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  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Very depthful - the brevity doesn't shine through - love the stark imagery you have penned.

    Thanks for entering, much luck,