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I thank you God for loving me.

Your love lifted me to this place,

a place where angels dwell in grace.

A place for humans to free their mind,

a place where burdens soon unwind.

~*~

Each time I pray my wings expand,

up and away, holding your hand.

Ascending through tunnels of light,

stretching my wings in blissful flight.

~*~ 

Your tranquil touch I found through prayer,

always knowing that you were there.

When I needed to hear your voice,

you spoke with me and I rejoiced.

~*~ 

Through all my tears and tragedies,

I came to you on bended knees.

You listened close and heard my plea,

I thank you God for loving me.

~*~

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 1, 2008

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    This is a gorgeous piece of poetry and I think we often forget to thank the divine powers for loving us and allowing us the freedom of life and lesson. Excellent piece


  • gaze
    February 1, 2008

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    Beautiful and touching poem sweet Dove.
    may your prayers always be heard


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    January 31, 2008

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    Oh, this is so beautiful and filled with such peace, my sister. Such a beautiful poem to God, thanking him for the power of prayer.

    This line in the last stanza has a typo:
    "I’ve came to you on bended knees."

    should be "I came".

    Thanks for sharing this peace! The delicate background suits it perfectly!


  • queen Moderators member
    January 31, 2008

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    This is really touching. You have such a gift.

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