Undieing passion, impeccable fashion,
beautiful eyes remain
Pleasurable dreams, fantasies extreme,
no two days the same
Distance closes, my heart composes,
songs known only to me and you
Passionate embrace, smiling face,
a euphoria only experienced by few
Take a chance, blissful romance,
see how my heart is true
Wearing my ring, Our song we'll sing,
love will see us through
Alone before, Together once more,
Eterity will come too soon
Days upon hours, our heart's empower,
interfere not for we are immune
All I see, and all I can be,
yours for always more
My sapphire dream, to you I sing,
my true love, mi amore
A contest entry
- Anything Your Heart Desires by Rhapsody.
550 points, ended December 27, 2008, 98 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Simple Beauty by Sunkissed xo.
620 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awe! this is soooooo cute dude! it makes me feel like love just might exsist and idk.... im just sorry bout what happened....
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This is divine
Your beautiful words, coupled with the lovely rhyme, truly makes my heart sing. I like the fact that this is not tainted by regret or longing or sorrow of any sort, it is merely happy and full of love, light and joy. A true love song! Thanks so much for entering the contest, and well done on a great write!
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Beautiful!
I could hear music as I was reading this!
very good discription, you have an awsoem way with words for capturing your emotion a this point in time! Keep writing!
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Its Amazing
how Love does give you a song in your heart to sing of Love's embrace, oh sweet surrender keeps me encased in your love! beautiful! well done!!
Blessings
Rend
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Indeed a very beautiful write. Best of luck to you in the contest
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Oh, I love the meter in this poem as it runs along like the most marvelous river in Spring! Fine rhyme and just an extremely satisfying poem! bravo...
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beautiful. If you want this to be a song. I'd be more than happy to turn it into one. You'd have to come up with a chorus. That's your choice, it's your poem. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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