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Sixteen

Sixteen words of betrayal

Sixteen lies of deceit

Sixteen nails in my coffin

Sixteen revengeful heartbeats

 

 

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  • Patpowers silver member
    March 13, 2008
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    You sure used these 16 words to perfection. A touching work Katey. THANKS!


  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Love the last line, very strict of full of imagery. An engaging line to end with.

    Thanks for entering, much luck,