the wraiths stare
from abandoned shadows,
intentions etched on walls;
layers of filth left untouched.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by elemental angel.
500 points, ended January 31, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Damn. Dark, spooky and intriguing! Very well penned take on the prompt!
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You are delightful, missy & I will eat you all up
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abandoned, great take on the prompt. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.
Bravo
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Well done! full of imagery! good luck in the contest
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Wow, wonderful work here!
Good luck to you with it
my friend!
Jeremy0826 -
hehe thinks melted has a cleaning fetish, this is a great take on the prompt
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