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Santee Tongue

Shattered Santee mentality

Twisted into drops of sun;

Fingering scars
That only glow hotter

At night.

A contest entry

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 7, 2008
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    Nice blisters.
    Enjoyed.


    • shirk
      February 7, 2008
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      Blisters?
      Lol

      Thanks for the comment sugarpants.


  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Love the ending - beautiful and fluent. Your phrasing, as gorgeous as it always should be.

    Thanks for entering, much luck,