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My Knight

As I sit here and write
I start to wonder
where is my knight
the one who will save me
or could it be
that I do not have one
so he will never come
but let me not think this way
for I am sure he is on his way
to save me from where I stay
a place like no-other
I have known all my life
this is my home
where I have grown
grown to be the woman I am
so beautiful and bright
still waiting for my knight
I am sure he will arrive
perfect and on time
if there was a time
but i do not know
when he will show
so I will keep waiting
waiting
waiting
waiting for my knight
for I know
that he will come
and be my hun
to n ever leave me
unloved and lonely
my knight will be brave and strong
he will try not to do anything wrong
because he is Mr.Right not
Mr.Wrong
my knight
he will love me for me
you will see
he will care for me
and Cherish me
for as long as possible
he'll be a charmor
because he is my
prince in shining armor
he is my knight
we'll shine bright
together forever
my knight and I

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  • CinematicInk
    April 26, 2008

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    mr. right, my knight.

    i like the topic. i'm sure your knight will come! waiting is difficult, but so worth it. i like the format. good work@


  • Lamia
    February 8, 2008

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    I love the hope in this poem. The song Mr. Sandman came into my head as I was reading it haha.
    I think you're right, everything happens when it's supposed and someday all our knights show up on time no matter what.
    Great poem. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest


  • MustangTommy
    January 31, 2008
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    I think this is a poem about optimism. Thats what I think. Hope. Faith. Dreams. Let downs. lol j/k