Whispers
Overheard
Rendering
Thoughts
Helpless.
Leaving
Existence
Shall
Suffice.
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you ever feel this way?
damn...I spilled on my paper..
Written November 17th, 2003
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This is really powerful...you tell us about that feeling in very few words...yet it is enough...though you can expand on this topic and write long elaborate poems...instead you just break it down to its core...very powerful...
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I remember a friend telling me how worthless she felt~ It made me cry
~ She was to precious~ This reminded me of that conversation~ Awesome acrostic piece here~ Keep them coming~ Look forward to more~ Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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very powerful, less words seem to give more strength to the poem - I can really identify with this -
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I HATE when poems poop on you! *offers you a pooper scooper*
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ya, I tried to fix that before..but it pooped on me...then I forgot about it
It's fixed now 
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hmmmm....I liked the first part, cuz yeah, I HATE when that happens...but
Leaving
Existance (psst. it's existence)
Shall
Suffice.
shall suffice? Bull. Hmph, someone doesn't like you, they are jealous...never give up who you are for people...hey, I think I'll take my own advice
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Very short..yet very powerful! I liked it
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