The stairs
to the end
Up..
I fall
Down..
I drown
Time to let go
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by elemental angel.
500 points, ended January 31, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice?
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Not alot of words yet says so much! Leaves me to wonder if you are feeling time to let go of a past love or your life? Very good imagery of being stuck with no where to turn. I like it alot!
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Excellent take on the picture...love it...
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somewhere between falling up and drowning the balance of zero gravity will hold you in place
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Simply yet profound! well done! good luck in the contest
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thanks so much for the comment!!
Definitely took a minute to come with something for this pic!
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'Down I drown'
Very enticing phrasing, love the suttle alliteration. Nicely done.
Much luck
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Nicely done.
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awwwwww I like this! You captured the entrance awsome !
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thanks so much! it was such a hard pic!
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Great take on the prompt thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
Bravo
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This is Great I like your take on the prompt Good luck with this poem in the contest. Redwing Spirit
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Interesting take on this picture.
Great job my friend and good luck
to you with it here! Thanks a lot
for sharing it!
Jeremy0826 -
Hey there! Good luck to you!
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