Behind it All

Town of poverty
Her ragged dress
What hides behind
Are eyes that impress

A contest entry

Got 13 words? by Naridill. 380 points, ended January 31, 2008, 12 entries
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crimsondew
February 1, 2008
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I am impressed with this...Good going!
- Lost-Rose-Petal
  February 1, 2008
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  thanks so much!
- - crimsondew
    February 1, 2008
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    yw
vici377
January 31, 2008
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wow
13 amazing words..linked to make them pop..thanx so much for sharing..namaste..
Naridill
January 31, 2008

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Isn't that the truth. Short but beautiful. You have given life behind the image. Nicely done.

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