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So What?

He's old
I'm young
Who cares?
So in
Love and
So not
Caring

Author notes

the format makes it easier to make only 13 words, and makes it actually look like a poem.

A contest entry

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  • CoundessaScarlotti
    February 1, 2008
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    Pretty Good

    It's not bad for only supposed to have 13 words.
    Hope to read more


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    Got 13 words, I got milk(lol)! I see you said quite a bit with your 13 words as this could be turned into a love story in many proportions. Good luck in the contest.

    Ted E


  • Naridill gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    A poem is in the words, not format
    But nicely written, very effective wording and phrasing.

    Thanks for entering,


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 31, 2008

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    Well done with this one!
    Don't ever let anyone stand
    in your way when it comes to
    the one that you love. Good
    luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826