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Wasted

Withering
Away
So
Tenaciously.
Entering
Devastation.

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I'm wasted
Written November 17th, 2003

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  • mystic oceania
    March 26, 2005
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    short and serious. i liked it, it was true and got your message across really well great write
    ~mystic


  • glazecovered
    December 10, 2003
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    In my little world choosing to be wasted is choosing to wither away slowly... At least that's what I tell people when I don't want them to drink... I can be quite a hypocrite sometimes...and though there's nothing wrong with having *a little* fun (hee hee), still, choosing to drink is choosing to wither away. This is awesome.

  • DeadlyKisses
    November 16, 2003
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    It's short but sweet.. it's great! I really liked it .. I haven't read many acroustic poems.. but this one is truely great! You have true talent! Keep writing!
    Much Love,
    Sarah