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love, love, love


Love love love
Just like a shove
It'll kick you down
And make you frown
Love love love

 

love is like a flower

that is set upon a tower

that then gets knocked over

and kicked around Dover

like it came down in a shower

 

love is a is a rose

all beautiful and nice

but then as it grows

it wont look that good twice

 

 

L is for looped into eternal love

O is for an overjoyed dove

V is for vairying and all the above

E is for eternal in every way of love

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  • Eternal-Dreamer
    February 3, 2008

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    hmmm i like this poem it sounds to me like it should be a song, it seems to make more sense if you think of it that way, i like it,


  • Frodofan silver member
    January 31, 2008

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    Interesting with the acrostic in the end, but pretty simple overall. The rhyming is very simple and the rhyme of "dove/love" is HIGHLY overused. I'm not too sure about the first stanza either. A shove? This doesn't seem to fit the rest of the poem.