For all the times you cheated on me.
Right under my nose and I still couldn't see.
For cursing my life with the presence of you.
Faking our relationship and calling me boo.
You'll never imagine what I want to say.
So let me spell out before you go away.
But before I do.
Let me say this.
Here's a BIG FUCK YOU.
Now it's you who's been dissed.
Author notes
pappacass
In a list
A contest entry
- BackStabber! by GypsyEyes.
575 points, ended April 18, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - STAY. by DAMSELx.
420 points, ended May 29, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What are your thoughts on this topic?
Comments
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Well that was straight forward, my best wishes in the contest.
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For EVERY guy who has cheated........hell ya, this was great. Thank you for your entry, good luck!
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This was an interesting take on the prompt. I can understand where you're coming from too, I've been cheated on before. Excellent write, and good luck in my contest.
XXCrimsonRaineXX -
saying fuck you in such an amazing poem, still i really like it.
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Can't believe I haven't commented on this before! A great job, really sticks it to em! Love the mixed acrostic, wonderfully done hunni
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lol i like this poem better for backstabber then damned to love you
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hahhahahahahhahhaaaaa!!!! this made my day! love it! so simple and to the point! FUCK YOU! i like it! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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you bastard
lol
way to give everyone the finger
in the most subtlest of poems
i hope you win
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Thanks pappacass. I still love this poem in everyway. Thanks for sharing
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Ah well, its nice to know how you feel about the subject... lol.
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LOL... I think everyone has a poem with this title stashed somewhere. But EVERYONE gets fucked over at one point or anohter! Well done, poet. Write on!
Dez
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The anger put into this is amazing. I love how it spelled Fuck You, very creative.
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HAHA, I think that hanyone who has been a relationship like this will be able to relate. The use of color in this poem is really cool, I like it! I'm not all about the graphic but other than that it is really great!
Good luck in the contest!
~Cheers~
Melvina
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Ouch. I think a lot of people want to say this to someone at some stage. LOL. Cool write.
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Justified
I give you a cheer, speaking as someone who's been cheated on. Esp. when the other person is faithful. It's a bitch, but it happens. Yay for personal justice.
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giggling but not admitting that
really enjoyed the RELEASE of this poem!
Thankyou dear poet for finding the words that describe
what we don't have the courage to say!
and for some damn reason I feel better too!
lol...oh gawd.....but remember, I am not admitting
that today! snicker-snicker,...well maybe I am...
ears2hearyou/Seattle
Good good job!
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This is my favorite of the poems that you have written. I can definitely relate.
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I have soooo been there!! Many times in fact! Liked the anger coming through in this! You tell her!!
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The anger and hostility are truly foremost in this poem like woah! Let me at 'er Uncle Shawn 'n I'll get her for you. Wow, having been there myself, I can totally agree with you on this poem...
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LOL
I think you did a wonderful jobe in this Shawn 
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