blood ridden residue all over your blade
love truly hurts but you wouldn't stay
the blade hurts worse if you know what i mean
when your with her I Fuckin scream!
Its a chainsaw romance out there baby
you got to play and get hurt
the blade hurts worse than the heart you break
so is it love or my blade your going to take?
seen you with her today
seen our love die
so i took my chainsaw
and cut the bitch dry!
die for love ?
die today?
now your bitch can't fuck you sane!
one for the money and two for the road
you aint going nowhere except six feet down a hole!
reaving up my chainsaw
seen your fucking heart
so i took it as a treasue
and knew we wouldn't part.
dug a hole in the backyard
sure didnt take me long
threw your pieces of what was left
down a 6ft fucking dome!
closer to your queen now
bow and get on your knees
you would anyways even if it wasn't her you had to please!
play in the fire
but never break my heart
because this chainsaw is coming
to take care of what you fucking start!
I loved you once
but when the blood I did see
it was over baby
plain for any one to see!
The love sure came easy
and you came and went
but now it is over and you are 6 feet
down a ditch!
Think twice before cheating
and you better think hard
because that hole sure gets lonley
out in my backyard!
Author notes
option number 8
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A contest entry
- Chuck Palahniuk-- one by birch.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 6 entries
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Comments
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Violent, but hilarious to read.
Has a certain mental image of what it'd be like if one were to date Leatherface, and dump him....break his heart, and he'll shred yours!
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Another great write by redhanded. so twisted and sick... remind me to never break up with you.. i might just be hacked to death lol
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this style is generally not one that i am into, or theme i should actually say, but i really think you have something nice in that second stanza. it's what most loudly speaks to me.
justin -
The Heartbroken Anthem!!!
I really liked it! I would hate to get you mad...seriously...lol
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