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The Mermaid

Scales shining,
Tale swishing,
Hair flowing freely,
Entwined with her merman,
Gliding in the sea,
One gentle movement,
Calm stillness,
The mermaid swims

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  • Xx Luna xX
    February 1, 2008

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    Thank you for entering

    The short lines and choice of words make this poem unique... Good job!


  • RainbowGirl257
    January 31, 2008
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    thanks


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    awww yay this is such a beautiful write and i love the imagery you paint within this well done my beautiful dragon